Pages

Tuesday, 10 August 2021

The Girl and the Giraffe (Quick write)

Soon I will be free as a bird. I'm scared, excited and heartbroken that I'm leaving her. It felt like my heart was made of glass and had been dropped on the floor. 


The girl takes me far on a journey to the savanna. The next day we arrived in the savanna. It's as hot as a height of summer. In the distance I see other giraffes staring at me. The girl saw the other giraffes and took my leash off and said her last goodbye to me. I saw a river of tears in her eyes when I ran to the other giraffes. The girl waved at me and walked sadly into the distance. I was happy to be back with the other giraffes but I missed the girl more. I felt lost without her like cereal without milk.                  

                                                              Pic of the Girl and the Giraffe

 

                                                      today we had to use similes in our writing.









No comments:

Post a Comment

Thank you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comments. 
Positive - something I have done well.
Thoughtful - a sentence or more that  lets me know you that you read/watched or listened to what I had to say.
Helpful - please give me some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about.

Note: only a member of this blog may post a comment.